Tuesday, September 27, 2011

writing with rich vocabulary

We wrote a class fairy tale this morning, and we'd love to share it with you! We included our reading vocabulary words for the week.


Dog versus cat
Once upon a time ,a cat and dog were best pals .The dog was working on a dangerous experment. There was an explosion! Cat walked onto the mess this caused him to turn evil and his paws began to ache. Then the cat stated bothering the dog and the dog started to bark .The owner made the dog go outside .
cat had a passion for making trouble. He decided to mix all of the potions together. Cat had a splendid idea-he was going to take over the world! Cat thought, ’’I admire his hard work , but I shouldn,t be concentrating on him right now. ‘’
Cat drinks the ,and waits to get stronger and take over the world. However, this does not happen.he becomes weaker instead!As he weakens ,he sees Dog sobbing in the yard.Dog comes in ,finds the antidote,and saves Cats life the dog and cat live happily ever after!

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